Excellent update Lukium. Excellent writing. My only concern is that you always use only he, him, man, men - and although traditionally acceptable - you must realize you’re excluding half of the population. I challenge you to use more inclusive terms in your future narrative - men and women, he and she, him and her, we, they, us, person, people - as I’d like to see your good work extended further - without (however unintentionally) overlooking our sisters in arms.
Excellent update Lukium. Excellent writing. My only concern is that you always use only he, him, man, men - and although traditionally acceptable - you must realize you’re excluding half of the population. I challenge you to use more inclusive terms in your future narrative - men and women, he and she, him and her, we, they, us, person, people - as I’d like to see your good work extended further - without (however unintentionally) overlooking our sisters in arms.
In this moment, we can't afford to be nagged about grammar.
Thank you, again.
Thank you 🫡🇺🇸